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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I would like to congrat you in so many ways. The only detail i would like to note, is the expression your face (well, the character face) is about the same in most of your works, maybe you can add a bit of feeling on it, like anger in this one, or maybe fear in other works. If you have trouble with that, or with some physical features (such as expression, pose, muscles or hands), try to take some pictures of yourself with the characteristics you want to use.
Anything beside that is great, the wings, the armor, the environment... everything is beyond epicness. Keep the good job!!
Even though your picture is beautifully realised there a few things that look unfitting.
The first one is the arm that holds the sabre. The muscle of the upper arm seems to be in front of the forearm (from the viewer's perspective) which implies an unnatural position of the arm, like the forearm was pitching backwards... I just tried it and it really hurts.
The second one is his facial expression. He does not look angry or sure of victory or anything else. He has an almost perfectly neutral face. One side of his upper lip is raised a little suggesting that he does not think a great deal of his combatant. But his eyebrows do not support this.
Apart from that, I think you did a great piece of art. I love all the details like the blood vessels on his wings, his horns, the flying stones and the glow on the sabre. Also every other part of the anatomy seems absolutely right to me even though I am no expert. And the best thing about it is the power it shows.
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