me as Dragon king again ( what a joke ) Painted by me and my bro Gelar it's inspired by the old version of my character and hope you guys will like it i am making Short movie on it in Aftereffect !! hope it's will finish soon ( feel free to use it as wallpaper ) lol My Facebook [link] Thank you for viewing my work - Comments & Cirque welcome
You have a really awesome technique. With only an image you turn yourself into a character of some animated world full of adventure, mystical creatures and amazing storyline.
I would like to congrat you in so many ways. The only detail i would like to note, is the expression your face (well, the character face) is about the same in most of your works, maybe you can add a bit of feeling on it, like anger in this one, or maybe fear in other works. If you have trouble with that, or with some physical features (such as expression, pose, muscles or hands), try to take some pictures of yourself with the characteristics you want to use.
Anything beside that is great, the wings, the armor, the environment... everything is beyond epicness. Keep the good job!!
I may not be the most capable one to critique this great work and it is my first critique but I give it a try.
Even though your picture is beautifully realised there a few things that look unfitting. The first one is the arm that holds the sabre. The muscle of the upper arm seems to be in front of the forearm (from the viewer's perspective) which implies an unnatural position of the arm, like the forearm was pitching backwards... I just tried it and it really hurts. The second one is his facial expression. He does not look angry or sure of victory or anything else. He has an almost perfectly neutral face. One side of his upper lip is raised a little suggesting that he does not think a great deal of his combatant. But his eyebrows do not support this.
Apart from that, I think you did a great piece of art. I love all the details like the blood vessels on his wings, his horns, the flying stones and the glow on the sabre. Also every other part of the anatomy seems absolutely right to me even though I am no expert. And the best thing about it is the power it shows.
I would like to congrat you in so many ways. The only detail i would like to note, is the expression your face (well, the character face) is about the same in most of your works, maybe you can add a bit of feeling on it, like anger in this one, or maybe fear in other works. If you have trouble with that, or with some physical features (such as expression, pose, muscles or hands), try to take some pictures of yourself with the characteristics you want to use.
Anything beside that is great, the wings, the armor, the environment... everything is beyond epicness. Keep the good job!!
Even though your picture is beautifully realised there a few things that look unfitting.
The first one is the arm that holds the sabre. The muscle of the upper arm seems to be in front of the forearm (from the viewer's perspective) which implies an unnatural position of the arm, like the forearm was pitching backwards... I just tried it and it really hurts.
The second one is his facial expression. He does not look angry or sure of victory or anything else. He has an almost perfectly neutral face. One side of his upper lip is raised a little suggesting that he does not think a great deal of his combatant. But his eyebrows do not support this.
Apart from that, I think you did a great piece of art. I love all the details like the blood vessels on his wings, his horns, the flying stones and the glow on the sabre. Also every other part of the anatomy seems absolutely right to me even though I am no expert. And the best thing about it is the power it shows.
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