Hello my world well I heard about : ( A boy in third grade shooting in his school ) [link] LOL so I was crazy to do it and i had fun with this one too done in 6 hours Sources many thanks for all great stock images [link] Grenade [link] broken bulb [link] BLACK HAWK [link] American Flag [link] Ammo [link] Funny Child Sxc.hu sources 2 Pink Eraser by Bubbels [link] Green Chalkboard by jaylopez [link] hope you like it guys LOL don't forget to see it full size Regards Designer kratos
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mmkkk this is my 2nd critique so trying to stick to something i know, like photomanipulation, so people dont call me a dumbass. Um good things first, when i first saw this i thought it was an airbrush so thats pretty kool. Just taking a shot in the dark but im guessing u used lightroom to make it look like a painting, witch is a kool idea. I never used ny of those particular presets myself but i like how u used it here. I like the lighting effects on the left side, they dont make sense it all but u made it work, so props there. The kids expression is classic and definitely makes the picture great. The lighting on the side of his face is great and the overall placement of objects was well done. I love the small things u did here like the texture and twinkle on the grenade. The bad now i guess, first thing i really noticed wen i actually opened the picture was that it wasnt an airbrush cause the hair looks realistic and it really kills alot of the picture i personally think. Also it took me awhile to notice but there is a white line going around the right side of his face and hair, that i dont really think should be there. Downloaded the photo and opened it in photoshop to get a better look, i noticed u replaced the letters on the top of the grenade but i cant read wat they say, though i like how u changed the color of the text from the bottom. Only really noticed it wen i zoomed in on the nade but theres alot of blotches and inconsistencies on it. Also noticed the bullet holes are all the same but rotated a little, though u have to really look hard to see that so i dont really think thats a setback. I can see a couple more mistakes that i commonly see and fix in photoshop but i dont really think they are apparent to people who dont do photomanipulation. Um also great work on the shadows, they really do alot for the picture. I like how the overall image doesn't seem to cluttered but theres still alot to look at, witch is difficult to achieve. But great job man, hope i dont get torn up for my critique .
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